What can you say about the importance of frost days?
학생이 쓴 원문
In Korea, summer is really hot these days.
Actually, I loved the summer season because there is my birthday.
However, I cannot endure the hot summer anymore.
That\'s why now I prefer the winter season.
In winter, many animals have hibernations.
Also, we can enjoy the ski.
We can enjoy a lot of things in winter!
강사 첨삭
Hello, Chloe!
Here are the corrections.
In Korea, summer is really hot these days.
>>Correct!
Actually, I loved the summer season because there is my birthday. However, I cannot endure the hot summer anymore.
>>Correct!
That\'s why now I prefer the winter season. In winter, many animals have hibernations.
>>That\'s why now, I prefer the winter season. In winter, many animals hibernates.
Also, we can enjoy the ski. We can enjoy a lot of things in winter!
>>Also, we can enjoy the skiing. We can enjoy a lot of things in winter!
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