What can you say about the latest fire alert in Australia?
학생이 쓴 원문
I saw about the news. It was really bad.
Fortunately,I think most person went to the shelter.
So they didn\'t die many.
But many animals were sacrificed in australia.
Specially problem is getting stronger wind.
Last week,There came fire typhoon.
I hope that It\'s stoping fire and sacrificed.
강사 첨삭
Hi Jo!
I am happy that you are well-familiar with the recent news.
I hope that you will improve your sentence construction.
Be mindful on your punctuation and capitalization when you make sentences.
But, I know you are improving these days.
Here are the corrections.
I saw about the news. It was really bad.
>> I saw about it on the news. It was really bad.
Fortunately,I think most person went to the shelter.
>> Fortunately, I think most people went to an evacuation shelter.
So they didn\'t die many.
>> So, they didn\'t die.
But many animals were sacrificed in australia.
>> But, many animals were sacrificed in Australia.
Specially problem is getting stronger wind.
>> Specially that the problem is the wind getting stronger.
Last week,There came fire typhoon.
>> Last week, there came a typhoon.
I hope that It\'s stoping fire and sacrificed.
>> I hope that it will stop the fire.
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