What can you say about the latest fire alert in Australia?
학생이 쓴 원문
In fact, I didn\'t know that before i got my homework.
But i can find many article in the internet and I am really serprised.
the fire has been maintained for six months.
and the forest are damaged.
I heard koalas are in danger of extinct.
I am affraid I will never see koalas again.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Yeah, you are right! Koalas are beco[이름]g extinct. I have never seen one, too. Haha
I\'m afraid I would only see them on pictures. I hope not!
Oh, your sentences below usually have lapses with capitalization and spelling. Be careful!
Here are the corrections.
In fact, I didn\'t know that before i got my homework.
>> In fact, I didn\'t know that before until I got my homework.
But i can find many article in the internet and I am really serprised.
>> But, I can find many articles in the internet and I am really surprised.
the fire has been maintained for six months.
>> The fire has been retained for six months.
and the forest are damaged.
>> And the forests are damaged.
I heard koalas are in danger of extinct.
>> I heard Koalas are in danger of extinction.
I am affraid I will never see koalas again.
>> I am afraid I will never see koalas again.
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