What can you say about the tipping culture?

2019-12-19 · 첨삭 강사 Elly

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In my country, people rarely give a tip at any restaurant or to a serving person. So, I am usually panicked about whether I should give it and how much I should pay it after I use their services in countries where have this custom. Additionally, I sometimes feel like that I pay more money than the value of their effort. This thought might be caused by cultural variances. Kindness and mindful services are sort of mandatory manners as a salesperson in Korea. Moreover, some people abuse this behaviour in a different way, especially, when they drink at the bar and want to flirt with someone. Therefore, tipping contains a little negative nuance in my country. To this context, I do not have pleasant experiences related to tips, and it seems unreasonable to me. Maybe, it would be better to describe the percentage of the tip on the menu and pay it with the price of goods.

강사 첨삭

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Teacher ELLY.

What can you say about the tipping culture?

In my country, people rarely give a tip at any restaurant or to a serving person.

>>In my country, people rarely give a tip at any restaurant or to a server.

or>>In my country, it’s rare for people to tip a server at any restaurant.

So, I am usually panicked about whether I should give it and how much I should pay it after I use their services in countries where have this custom.

>>So, I usually panick about whether I should give a tip and how much, after I get served in countries where they have this custom.

Additionally, I sometimes feel like that I pay more money than the value of their effort.

>>Additionally, I sometimes feel like I paid more money than the value of their service.

This thought might be caused by cultural variances.

CORRECT!

or>>This idea could be the result of different cultural backgrounds.

Kindness and mindful services are sort of mandatory manners as a salesperson in Korea.

>>Kindness and thoughtful service are sort of mandatory manners for a salesperson in Korea.

Moreover, some people abuse this behaviour in a different way, especially when they drink at the bar and want to flirt with someone.

CORRECT!

or>>Furthermore, a number of people take advantage of this, especially when they will drink at a bar and flirt with someone.

Therefore, tipping contains a little negative nuance in my country.

CORRECT!

or>>So, giving a tip is a bit laced with some negativity in my country.

To this context, I do not have pleasant experiences related to tips, and it seems unreasonable to me.

>>In this context, I do not have pleasant experiences related to tips, and it seems unreasonable to me.

or>>In relation to this, I do not have a pleasant experience about giving tips, because it is kind of unreasonable to me.

Maybe, it would be better to describe the percentage of the tip on the menu and pay it with the price of goods.

>>Maybe, it would be better to include the percentage of the tip on the menu and it should be automatically added with the meal.

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