What can you say about your English class at school?

2023-09-18 · 첨삭 강사 Julia

학생이 쓴 원문

It is so noisy to hear the class. It\'s because our class\' students are so active and noisy. Actually, I hate this atmosphere of the class. It\'s because I want to hear the class clearly and calmingly. So, my school English teacher said, \"this class is so hard to teach.\"

강사 첨삭

Hi, Daisy. Thank you so much for doing your homework and for doing a great job in answering your homework. Keep up the good work and see you in class! ^^
-T. Julia
It is so noisy to hear the class. It\'s because our class\' students are so active and noisy. 
>> It is noisy in our class because the students are very active and loud.
Actually, I hate this atmosphere of the class.
>> Correct
It\'s because I want to hear the class clearly and calmingly. 
>> It\'s because I want to hear the class clearly and calmly. 
So, my school English teacher said, \"this class is so hard to teach.
>> Correct

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