What can younger people learn from spending more time with older people?
학생이 쓴 원문
I belive that younger people can learn various things from older people.
The death of an old man is like the loss of a library.
Most older people is wisdom and humility,of course not all older people.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Grace!
Wow! I was amazed by how you compared the death of an old man to the loss of a library! It’s a powerful way to show how much wisdom and humility are lost during this time. It also includes culture and tradition, which are disappearing because many younger generations don’t want to learn about them. It is indeed important to learn from older people so that these traditions and knowledge can live on.
-T. Caitlyn
I believe that younger people can learn various things from older people.
>> CORRECT
The death of an old man is like the loss of a library.
The death of an old man is like the loss of a library.
>> CORRECT
Most older people is wisdom and humility,of course not all older people.
Most older people is wisdom and humility,of course not all older people.
>> Most older people possess wisdom and humility; of course, not all older people do.
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