What can younger people learn from spending more time with older people?
학생이 쓴 원문
Young generation can learn many things from elder generation.
Youngers know many things than elders, especially new tech.
However, elder people have many experiences about life.
강사 첨삭
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Young generation can learn many things from elder generation.
>> The younger generation can learn many things from the older generation.
Youngers know many things than elders, especially new tech.
>> Young people know more about modern technology than older people.
However, elder people have many experiences about life.
>> However, older people have a lot of life experience.
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