What career do you think a large number of young people in your country want to pursue?
학생이 쓴 원문
Korean young people still want to be a specialized job such as a doctor, lawyer.
Labor market in Korea is recently not good, because a recession.
So, this situation has become more increased.
강사 첨삭
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Korean young people still want to be a specialized job such as a doctor, lawyer.
Many young people in Korea still want specialized jobs such as doctors or lawyers.
Labor market in Korea is recently not good, because a recession.
However, the labor market in Korea has not been good recently because of the recession.
So, this situation has become more increased.
As a result, this situation has become even worse.
Many young people in Korea still want specialized jobs such as doctors or lawyers.
Labor market in Korea is recently not good, because a recession.
However, the labor market in Korea has not been good recently because of the recession.
So, this situation has become more increased.
As a result, this situation has become even worse.
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