What career do you want 10 years from now? Answer in a few sentences.
학생이 쓴 원문
I want to have a job related to the current major which is digital marketing now. Furthermore, if possible, I would like to engage in a career with making and editing online contents.
강사 첨삭
Good evening, Judy!
If you can visualize how to achieve these goals, they are yours to take! You can be the best best digital marketer out there. You have got to start practicing now.
Thank you for sharing your dream career here on your homework. Always keep up your motivationa and passion in class and here on your extra work,
See you in class!
-T. Donna =)
>> I want to have a job related to my current major which is digital marketing.
Furthermore, if possible, I would like to engage in a career with making and editing online contents.
>> Correct!
Or: Furthermore, if possible, I would like to engage in a career which makes and edits online contents.
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