What career opportunities are there for the younger generation in your country?
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The younger generation has fewer career opportunities than the older generation. When I was a child, Korea had a lot of production plants. Nobody warried about getting a job. The older generation thought that after graduation university school they can enter companies, when they wanted.But now, getting a good job is very hard. When big companies try to hire people who has a good ability. It means if you want to enter a big compnay, you have to improve your skills alot.
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Hi, [이름]ny!
Wow. That is shocking to me. Knowing that South Korea\'s economy continues to improve and with the low birth rate, it should increase the employment rate. That is really unexpectedly sad.
~ Trixia
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The younger generation has fewer career opportunities than the older generation.
- CORRECT.
When I was a child, Korea had a lot of production plants.
- CORRECT.
Nobody warried about getting a job.
- Nobody was worried about getting a job.
The older generation thought that after graduation university school they can enter companies, when they wanted.
- The older generation thought that after graduation from university, they could enter companies when they wanted.
But now, getting a good job is very hard.
- CORRECT.
When big companies try to hire people who has a good ability.
- Big companies try to hire people with good abilities.
It means if you want to enter a big compnay, you have to improve your skills alot.
- It means that if you want to enter a big company, you have to improve your skills a lot.
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