What cartoons do young people watch today?
학생이 쓴 원문
Nowadays, many young people watch heros\' cartoons like Miraculous Ladybug. Also, they watch cartoons which have been popular since a long time ago. I also enjoy watching cartoons because it is a relaxing activity. Without any thought, I am able to concentrate on the cartoons and laugh. So, sometimes, I used to watch cartoons to make me smile. Although watching cartoons is so happy, it may cause negative situations. So, I will do my best to watch it moderately.
강사 첨삭
Hey, Kimberly!
It is nice to see a homework submission from you! I hope you are having a great day!
I was glad when I found out you also watch Miraculous Ladybug. It is pretty interesting.
Good job on submitting your homework.
See you in class later!
~ Teacher Gela
>> Nowadays, many young people watch heroic cartoons like Miraculous Ladybug.
Also, they watch cartoons which have been popular since a long time ago.
>> Also, they watch cartoons that have been popular for a long time.
I also enjoy watching cartoons because it is a relaxing activity.
>> CORRECT
Without any thought, I am able to concentrate on the cartoons and laugh.
>> CORRECT
So, sometimes, I used to watch cartoons to make me smile.
>> So, sometimes, I used to watch cartoons to make myself smile.
Although watching cartoons is so happy, it may cause negative situations.
>> Although watching cartoons is enjoyable, it may cause negative situations.
So, I will do my best to watch it moderately.
>> CORRECT
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