What causes decay in people\'s teeth?
학생이 쓴 원문
It cause from eat candy or jelly and so on, and if I don\'t brush my teeth, it will causes decay. So we have to reduce to eat candy or jelly and we need to brush our teeth every day.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Daisy!
Great job! Always brush your teeth and don\'t eat sweets too much to prevent tooth decay. ^_^
~Teacher Erin
It cause from eat candy or jelly and so on,
>>It causes by eating candy, jelly, and so on,
and if I don\'t brush my teeth,
>>CORRECT
it will causes decay.
>>it will cause decay.
So we have to reduce to eat candy or jelly and we need to brush our teeth every day.
>>So we must reduce eating candy or jelly and brush our teeth every day.
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