What causes stress? Answer in 3 to 5 sentences

2019-03-11 · 첨삭 강사 Lainey

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There is a bunch of causes of stress. Stress is sometimes caused by overwork, the relationship between the other ones and a huge catastrophe. Sometimes we suffer stress because of our mind. For example, too high expectation of ourselves and pressure on us can cause stress. But the same point is that: They are a burden on our mind and body.

강사 첨삭

Hi Su ^^


Thank you for always finding time to do your compositions.

I appreciate your efforts :)


T. Lainey <\",)))><


There is a bunch of causes of stress.

>>> correct


 Stress is sometimes caused by overwork, the relationship between the other ones and a huge catastrophe.

>>> Stress is sometimes caused by overworking, relationship between other people and a huge catastrophe.


 Sometimes we suffer stress because of our mind.

>>> Sometimes we suffer from stress because of what we think of.


 For example, too high expectation of ourselves and pressure on us can cause stress.

>>> correct


 But the same point is that: They are a burden on our mind and body.

>>> But at the same time, they can be a burden in our mind and our body.

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