What celebrations do you really look forward to? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
I really look forward to Chuseok.
In general, the company\'s busy season is from Lunar New Year\'s Day to Chuseok.
The company\'s atmosphere becomes more relaxed after Chuseok.
Many people take days off around the end of the year.
My company\'s anniversary is close to Chuseok, so a luxury meat gift set is delivered to my house.
Moreover, there is a bonus, so all the staff are happy.
Chuseok\'s temperature is cool, and there are lots of foods.
Therefore, Chuseok is my favorite holiday.
강사 첨삭
Hello, MK!
It\'s nice to know that it feels like you have a long celebration of Chuseok. Also, reading your homework makes me imagine how fun and enjoyable this celebration is for you and the people in your company.
- T. Caitlyn
I really look forward to Chuseok.>> CORRECT
In general, the company\'s busy season is from Lunar New Year\'s Day to Chuseok.
In general, the company\'s busy season is from Lunar New Year\'s Day to Chuseok.
>> CORRECT
The company\'s atmosphere becomes more relaxed after Chuseok.
The company\'s atmosphere becomes more relaxed after Chuseok.
>> CORRECT
Many people take days off around the end of the year.
Many people take days off around the end of the year.
>> CORRECT
My company\'s anniversary is close to Chuseok, so a luxury meat gift set is delivered to my house.
My company\'s anniversary is close to Chuseok, so a luxury meat gift set is delivered to my house.
>> CORRECT
Moreover, there is a bonus, so all the staff are happy.
Moreover, there is a bonus, so all the staff are happy.
>> CORRECT
Chuseok\'s temperature is cool, and there are lots of foods.
Chuseok\'s temperature is cool, and there are lots of foods.
>> CORRECT
Therefore, Chuseok is my favorite holiday.
Therefore, Chuseok is my favorite holiday.
>> CORRECT
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