What cellphone company do you use? Are you happy with this company?
학생이 쓴 원문
I use an iPhone 8 plus from [Company].
I think the iPhone is one of the most famous over the world.
I like its camera functions.
It has a very clear display, so I can take a picture clearly.
Also, I love its trademark, home button.
However, I cannot find any home button in the next series.
Also, its design is changed with mine, and I think it is not pretty.
I satisfied with my phone, but I have to consider the next phone.
I should think deeply about whether I buy the next phone in Samsung or Apple.
강사 첨삭
Hi Ms. [Name]!
Nice to hear from you.
Here are my corrections.
I use an iPhone 8 plus from [Company].
>> Correct!
I think the iPhone is one of the most famous over the world.
>>I think iPhone is one of the most famous brand over the world.
I like its camera functions. It has a very clear display, so I can take a picture clearly.
>> Correct!
Also, I love its trademark, home button. However, I cannot find any home button in the next series.
>> Correct!
Also, its design is changed with mine, and I think it is not pretty. I satisfied with my phone, but I have to consider the next phone.
>>Also, its design is changed from mine, and I think it is not pretty. I\'m satisfied with my phone, but I have to consider the next version.
I should think deeply about whether I buy the next phone in Samsung or Apple.
>>I should think deeply about whether I buy the next phone from Samsung or Apple.
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