What challenges did you face this year and how did you overcome them?
학생이 쓴 원문
I faced some challenges this year.
for example, I prepared some job interviews to go new company.
I\'m working at current company, so it was hard to prepare job interview at the same time.
Anyway, I finally got a new job.
강사 첨삭
Hey [이름]! Thank you for sharing about challenges you have faced this year and how you overcame it.
~~Teacher Ryka^^
I faced some challenges this year.
>> CORRECT
for example, I prepared some job interviews to go new company.
>> For instance, I prepared for job interviews to join a new company.
>> Balancing both responsibilities was challenging, while still working at my current one.
>> CORRECT
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