What challenges might older adults face when trying to reenter the job market after retirement?
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As far as I know, the young people who are looking for jobs could feel hard because there will be more applicants. You know , people who got retired get less than the minimum hourly wage. So, if I\'m human resource, I could hire them. I can save the budget in my company. Also, the generation gap could happen between generation X and Z.
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As far as I know, the young people who are looking for jobs could feel hard because there will be more applicants.
>> As far as I know, young people who are looking for jobs could find it hard because there will be more applicants.
You know , people who got retired get less than the minimum hourly wage.
>> CORRECT!So, if I\'m human resource, I could hire them.
>> So, if I\'m from human resource department, I could hire them.
I can save the budget in my company.
>> CORRECT!Also, the generation gap could happen between generation X and Z.
>> CORRECT!
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