What characteristics do you like about your parents?

2019-01-30 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

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What characteristics do you like about your parents? (in not more than 4 sentences) Back in my childhood days, there were a lot of smile and laughter in my house in spite of our poverty. My mother was positive and made us laugh with her jokes. I like my mother\'s sense of humor.

강사 첨삭

Hi there [이름]!


That\'s very nice.

It\'s quite heartwarming! ^^

My parents have the same characteristics.

I love them to the moon and back for giving me a happy life despite not having a lot of money.


~~t. Ally



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Back in my childhood days, there were a lot of smile and laughter in my house in spite of our poverty.

>> Back in my childhood days, there were a lot of smiles and laughter in my house despite of our poverty.


 My mother was positive and made us laugh with her jokes.

>> My mother is very positive and made us laugh with her jokes.


 I like my mother\'s sense of humor.

>> CORRECT!

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