What characteristics of your bestfriends do you like the most?

2014-02-27 · 첨삭 강사 Kristel

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We have something in common. Agriculture, forestry and landscape gardening love. It is the first time we would love to say the majors began to good effect so far has been continued destructive relationship. My middle school best friends are already 07 different majors each year, want to continue their relationship continued to be in touch and play games with a power play. I narrow but deep than wide and shallow relationships and relationships are preferred.

강사 첨삭

Hello there my dear~~ I hope I was able to understand your composition right. If there are some differences then maybe you could tell me about it in class~~ Please check the corrections I made here! Have a nice day and see you~~ T.Kristel- We have something in common. >> CORRECT!!Agriculture, forestry and landscape gardening love. >> We all love Agriculture, forestry and landscape gardening.It is the first time we would love to say the majors began to good effect so far has been continued destructive relationship. >>  At first, we loved talking about our majors and it had good effects to our relationships.My middle school best friends are already 07 different majors each year, want to continue their relationship continued to be in touch and play games with a power play. >> My best friends in Middle school have different majors each year so to continue my relationship with them we keep in touch and play games powerfully.I narrow but deep than wide and shallow relationships and relationships are preferred. >> I prefer having narrow but deep than wide and shallow relationships.

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