What characteristics should a good president have?
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Hi Kim!
Thank you for sharing your thoughts about the characteristics of a good president. Let us hope for the best in your country as you face a difficult situation.^^ Take care!
~Kelly^^
Nowadays,there is a problem about our country president.
>> Nowadays, there is a problem about our country\'s president.
>> Nowadays, our president is facing a problem.
Um... it is a little shame as a korean.
>> Um... it is a little shameful as a Korean.
Our president lied to us and someone secretly acted like president and made instructions to president.
>> Our president lied to us and someone secretly acted as the president and gave instructions to her.
So I think a president must have honesty.
>> So, I think a president must be honest.
I know that there were many scandle that a presient or minister lies to citizens over a world.
>> I know that there were many scandals where a president or a minister lies to citizens all over the world.
And if they lie to us, since that time citizens can\'t trust a government as well as them.
>> And if they lie to us, we can\'t trust them and the government anymore.
Any kind of relationship between human need trust.
>> Every human relationship needs trust.
We elected them because we belived that they represented our thinking and opinion to make our country a good place to live in.
>> We elected them because we believed that they represented our thoughts and opinions to make our country a good place to live in.
And a good president has calmness and a reasoning mind.
>> And a good president should have a calm and a reasoning mind.
In the emergency situation like terror, natural disaster, the president must make structions to save citizens or minimize damage.
>> In emergency situations like terrorism and natural disasters, the president must lead the country and give instructions to save the citizens and minimize damage.
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