What cheers you up when you are sad?
학생이 쓴 원문
When I feel sad or gloomy, I watch comedy show I like.
I watched many times actually, however it still funny for me.
After then I feel better.
강사 첨삭
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~~Teacher Ryka^^
When I feel sad or gloomy, I watch comedy show I like.
>> When I feel sad or gloomy, I watch a comedy show I like.
I watched many times actually, however it still funny for me.
>> I’ve watched it many times, but it’s still funny to me.
After then I feel better.
>> CORRECT
OR >> Afterward, I feel better.
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