what chores are your responsbility?
학생이 쓴 원문
I should study harder than other students.
The reason is that I want to enter where I want to go ucivercity.
Also, I should do religious life as christian regural.
The reason is that I think successful life are I always pray and living gratitude life for god.
강사 첨삭
Great job on doing your homework [이름]! See you later! ~T. Elisha
I should study harder than other students.
>> correct!
The reason is that I want to enter where I want to go ucivercity.
>> The reason is that I want to enter a university I want to go to.
Also, I should do religious life as christian regural.
>> Also, I regularly practice my religious life as a Christian.
The reason is that I think successful life are I always pray and living gratitude life for god.
>> The reason is that I think, to be able to have a successful life, I should pray and have gratitude to God.
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