What city do you think is the best in South Korea?

2022-04-13 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

학생이 쓴 원문

I think the Busan is the best place in South Korea. Because It\'s warmer than the other cities in winter season and there is near the beach. So I can go to fish with someone anytime. :)

강사 첨삭

Hi Elic!

That place sounds great. No wonder it\'s very popular for the locals and foreigners. :)

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I think the Busan is the best place in South Korea.

>> CORRECT

Because It\'s warmer than the other cities in winter season and there is near the beach.

>> It is because it is warmer there than other cities in South Korea during the winter season near the beach.

So I can go to fish with someone anytime. :)

>> This is why I can go fishing there with someone anytime.

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