What city do you think is the best in South Korea?

Hello Rachel!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

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T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

To be honest, it is Seoul. 

>> CORRECT!

There are many good Academies and facilities. 

>> There are many good academies and facilities. 

There are even many head office there. 

>> There are even many head offices there. 

Living Seoul is of course more comfortable to live.

>> Living in Seoul is, of course, more comfortable to live in.