What color best describes your personality?

2018-10-29 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

학생이 쓴 원문

I like dark pattern color such as black, blue, gray and navy. I always purchase that kind of color's clothes when I go for shopping. I don't think the preference of color represent my personality. Unfortunately, I don't have any ideas about the meaning of color, so it is really difficult to answer your question. I would like you to find my color if I describe my personality. I am an introvert person, so I hate meeting new people who I didn't know and really do not like making a speech to general. However, I can do very quickly in regard to the work that is repeating as same action. For example, rapping up the products, dealing with machine that I need to repeat same work, taping the boxes and treating the patients with radiation therapy machine. Actually, I used to love having a time with my friends and colleagues after work or special events. But I would like to love having a time with my family.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!!!

Nice job!!! I guess it would be blue.
I appreciate you doing good with your homework. 

Keep on reading! Keep on practicing! 
Have a great day ahead. 
Teacher Jeny ^_^


I like dark pattern color such as black, blue, gray and navy.

>>correct

I always purchase that kind of color\'s clothes when I go for shopping.

>>I always purchase those colored clothes when I go for shopping.

I don\'t think the preference of color represent my personality. 

>>correct
 Unfortunately, I don\'t have any ideas about the meaning of color, so it is really difficult to answer your question. 

>> Unfortunately, I don\'t have any ideas about the meaning of colors, so it is really difficult to answer your question. 
 I would like you to find my color if I describe my personality. 

>>correct
 I am an introvert person, so I hate meeting new people who I didn\'t know and really do not like making a speech to general. 

>> I am an introvert person, so I hate meeting new people who I didn\'t know and really do not like making a speech in public.
 However, I can do very quickly in regard to the work that is repeating as same action.

>>However, I can quickly do my work even if I do the same action.

For example, rapping up the products, dealing with machine that I need to repeat same work, taping the boxes and treating the patients with radiation therapy machine. 

>>For example, rapping up the products, dealing with the machine, taping the boxes and treating the patients with the radiation therapy machine. 
 Actually, I used to love having a time with my friends and colleagues after work or special events. But I would like to love having a time with my family.

>>Actually, I used to love having time with my friends and colleagues after work or special events. But I would like to love having a time with my family.






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