What comes into your head when you hear the word \"money\"? How important is money?
학생이 쓴 원문
When I hear the word money, I think of rich people and gold.
Money is very important because if I don\'t have money, I can\'t live at home and I can\'t eat food, so I can\'t go to the hospital even if my health gets worse.
강사 첨삭
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~ Teacher Tricia
When I hear the word money, I think of rich people and gold.
>>> When I hear the word \"money\", I think of rich people and gold.
Money is very important because if I don\'t have money, I can\'t live at home and I can\'t eat food, so I can\'t go to the hospital even if my health gets worse.
>>> Money is significant because if I don\'t have money, I can\'t get a house, or eat delicious food, and I won\'t be able to go to the hospital if I get badly sick.
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