What comes/springs to your mind when you hear the expression \'new\'?
학생이 쓴 원문
When I hear \'new\' word~
I can think about new class, new friends, new teacher when I get a new grade. In fact, I value my friend\'s very much, because friendships have built up over the years, so it\'s not that easy to break, so actually if I have to choice one of the love and friendship, then I will choice friendship. That\'s how much I cherish friendship, and I thought of my friend as soon as I saw this homework~^^;;
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Hello there, Maria!
Well, the word \'new\' could remind us of so many things.
Thank you so much for answering your homework. I\'ve read your composition well.
I also value my friends. For me, they\'re my sisters from different moms. :)
See you later in class!
__T. Mayleen ^^,)
When I hear \'new\' word~
I can think about new class, new friends, new teacher when I get a new grade.
I can think about new class, new friends, new teacher when I get a new grade.
>>> Whenever I hear the word \'new\', I think about new class, new friends and new teacher as I move up to the next grade level.
In fact, I value my friend\'s very much, because friendships have built up over the years, so it\'s not that easy to break, so actually if I have to choice one of the love and friendship, then I will choice friendship.
>>> In fact, I value my friends very because we\'ve built our friendship up over the years, thus, it\'s not easy to break/shatter. If I have to choose between love and friendship then I\'d pick friendship.
That\'s how much I cherish friendship, and I thought of my friend as soon as I saw this homework~^^;;
>>> CORRECT
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