What comes to mind when you hear the word ‘Disney’?
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When I think of disney, it comes to mind is Micky mouse.
Mickey Mouse was the first character what I saw as a child.
These days, Disney seems to be more famous for movies than animation.
For example, it is a movie like the Marvel series.
I like Iron Man at present.
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Hi Mr. [이름]!^^
Mickey Mouse was the first character what I saw as a child.
These days, Disney seems to be more famous for movies than animation.
For example, it is a movie like the Marvel series.
I like Iron Man at present.
Thank you for sending you rhomework.
One of my dreams is to go to Disneyland.
As what they say, it is a happy place.
Therefore, when I hear Disney, I think of Disneyland.
Andrea
When I think of disney, it comes to mind is Micky mouse.
>> When I hear Disney, Mickey Mouse comes to my mind.
Mickey Mouse was the first character what I saw as a child.
>> Mickey Mouse was the first character that I saw when I was young.
These days, Disney seems to be more famous for movies than animation.
>> Correct
For example, it is a movie like the Marvel series.
>> For example are Marvel series.
I like Iron Man at present.
>> I like Iron man at the moment.
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