What comes to mind when you hear the word \'magic\'?
학생이 쓴 원문
When I hear the word \'magic\', I imagine \'Harry Potter\'.
It\'s the novel every children like, and also I read it when I was a young child.
I crushed on the magic spell in that book so much.
To do the same thing Harry does, I even made a wand by myself!
강사 첨삭
Good evening, Sue!
(^___^)//
Thank you so much for answering your homework.
I tried my best to rephrase your sentences so the message or context will understood easily.
We can talk about this in class if you want to.
See you then.^^
__Teacher Mayleen :)
When I hear the word \'magic\', I imagine \'Harry Potter\'.
>>> Whenever I hear the word \'magic\', I imagine Harry Potter.
It\'s the novel every children like, and also I read it when I was a young child.
It\'s the novel every children like, and also I read it when I was a young child.
>>> It\'s a famous novel among kids. I also read it when I was young.
I crushed on the magic spell in that book so much.
I crushed on the magic spell in that book so much.
>>> I fell for the magic spells on that book.
To do the same thing Harry does, I even made a wand by myself!
To do the same thing Harry does, I even made a wand by myself!
>>> To live one of my fantasies, I made a wand for myself.
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