What comes to mind when you hear the word \'noodles\'?
학생이 쓴 원문
We Koreans have popular noodles called as \"ramen\". However, Ramen was one of main staples for poor people because it was much cheaper than other meals. Therefore, when I hear \"Ramen\", I envision poor children in small room eating Ramen in a hurry with their siblings. But not for these days, Ramen becomes one of children\'s favorite foods.
강사 첨삭
Good evening, Steve! ^^,)
Thank you so much for this composition. I think most, if not all, Koreans like to eat noodles. The only difference is that some people can eat spicy noodles, some cannot.
I am a noodle lover myself. I would surely choose noodles over rice or bread.
I will see you later in class.^^
__T. Mayleen :)
We Koreans have popular noodles called as \"ramen\".
>>> We Koreans have popular noodles called \"ramen\".
However, Ramen was one of main staples for poor people because it was much cheaper than other meals.
>>> However, \"ramen\" was one of the main staples for poor people because it was much cheaper than other meals.
Therefore, when I hear \"Ramen\", I envision poor children in small room eating Ramen in a hurry with their siblings.
>>> Therefore, when I hear \"noodles\", I envision poor children in a small room eating \"ramen\" in a hurry with their siblings.
But not for these days, Ramen becomes one of children\'s favorite foods.
>>> It\'s different now, as ramen has become one of children\'s favorite foods.
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