What comes to mind when you hear the word \'rice\'?
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The word \'rice\' makes me think that it is a \"healthy meal\".
Most of the Koreans, especially the older generation people, think that a substantial meal is having rice.
Actually, I prefer noodles or bread more than rice during the normal days.
But, when sometimes I get sick, my body asks me to find rice based foods like rice porridge, or rice with various side dishes.
So in my personal feeling is that I think naturally the body looks for the nutritions to fill what it needs and this was more \'rice\' than \'flours\' in my experience.
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Most of the Koreans, especially the older generation people, think that a substantial meal is having rice.
Actually, I prefer noodles or bread more than rice during the normal days.
But, when sometimes I get sick, my body asks me to find rice based foods like rice porridge, or rice with various side dishes.
So in my personal feeling is that I think naturally the body looks for the nutritions to fill what it needs and this was more \'rice\' than \'flours\' in my experience.
The word \'rice\' makes me think that it is a \"healthy meal\".
>> The word \'rice\' makes me think that the dish is a \"healthy meal\"
Most of the Koreans, especially the older generation people, think that a substantial meal is having rice.
>>Most Koreans, especially the older generation people, think that a substantial meal is having rice.
Actually, I prefer noodles or bread more than rice during the normal days.
>>CORRECT
But, when sometimes I get sick, my body asks me to find rice based foods like rice porridge, or rice with various side dishes.
>>CORRECT
So in my personal feeling is that I think naturally the body looks for the nutritions to fill what it needs and this was more \'rice\' than \'flours\' in my experience.
>> So based on my perspective, I think that out body naturally looks for the nutrition to fill what it needs.
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