What comes to mind when you hear the word \'weekend\'? Are you happy with a two-day weekend or shoul

2021-04-05 · 첨삭 강사 Tricia

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Before I work, I was used to look forward to coming weekends during week days because I could use my own time under my control without interrupting by any task or classes. The most thing that I like weekends is that I can have my own free time. But, after I got my job, weekends is nothing special to me anymore as my job is shift work. I can have my free time even though it\'s not weekends. So, I quite like my shift work. I think the more day-off there are, the more happier I would be. If my job weren\'t shift job, I would hope that wednesday will be added to weekends. I think wednesday is a proper day to take a rest in a week except for weekends(saturday, sunday). I heard a news that Spain is considering to introducing 4 working days a week. I hope that Korea considers this policy, too.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Solyna! ^^
Thank you so much for doing your homework.
Enjoy your the night! :)

~ Teacher Tricia

Before I work, I was used to look forward to coming weekends during week days because I could use my own time under my control without interrupting by any task or classes.
>> Before I started working, I used to look forward to the weekend because I could use my time freely without being interrupted by any task or classes.

The most thing that I like weekends is that I can have my own free time.
>> The thing I like most about the weekend is that I can have my free time.

But, after I got my job, weekends is nothing special to me anymore as my job is shift work.
>> But after starting working, the weekend doesn\'t feel special anymore as I work in a shifting job.

I can have my free time even though it\'s not weekends. So, I quite like my shift work.
>> I can have a free time, though it\'s not on the weekends. So, I quite like my shifting schedule at work.

I think the more day-off there are, the more happier I would be.
>> I think the more day-off there are, the happier I would be.

If my job weren\'t shift job, I would hope that wednesday will be added to weekends.
>> If my job weren\'t a shifting job, I would hope that Wednesday will be added to the weekend.

I think wednesday is a proper day to take a rest in a week except for weekends(saturday, Sunday).
>> I think Wednesday is a proper day to take a rest on a weekday.

I heard a news that Spain is considering to introducing 4 working days a week.
>> I heard the news about Spain considering having four working days a week.

I hope that Korea considers this policy, too.
>> I hope that Korea will consider this policy too.

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