What comes to mind when you think about your future?
학생이 쓴 원문
Actually, I don\'t believe that only good things will come to me. There are good things and bad things because all of people can\'t do things what they want. So I personally think it\'s important to be more patient and how to stand it.
강사 첨삭
Fantastic Tuesday to you, Elic! Everything you desire in life with all of your might is given to you. If you can get over the Monday blues, you can swim through the treacherous waters of Tuesday. Have a lovely day ahead. EXCELLENT.
Actually, I don\'t believe that only good things will come to me.
>> Actually, I believe that good and bad things can happen in the future.
There are good things and bad things because all of people can\'t do things what they want.
>> A lot of things can happen in the future because people are capable of doing what they want.
So I personally think it\'s important to be more patient and how to stand it.
>> So, I personally think that it is very important to be patient and understanding whatever may happen.
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