What companies should focus on
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It\'s important for companies to focus on loyal customers\' preferences or ideas. But, to increase the number of loyal customers and their profits, they should try not to fall behind the trend. To keep loyal customers happy, they also have to make some effort for improving their products.
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Hello, Gi [이름]!
Thank you for always doing your homework. You are right! Loyal customers are important, and for companies to keep them, they should also stay updated and be able to keep up with trends, especially now that people always look for something new worth their money.
- T. Caitlyn
It\'s important for companies to focus on loyal customers\' preferences or ideas.
>> CORRECT
But, to increase the number of loyal customers and their profits, they should try not to fall behind the trend.
>> But to increase the number of loyal customers and their profits, they should try not to fall behind trends.
To keep loyal customers happy, they also have to make some effort for improving their products.
>> To keep loyal customers happy, they also have to make some effort to improve their products.
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