What concerns might people have about ICE operating outside the U.S.?
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There has been huge controversies and protests after ICE announced they will be operating as a bodyguard for US high-ranking professionals during this Olympic taking place in Milan, Italy. Due to the organizations deteriorating reputation and horrendous approach to migrants, many people are afraid of their activities in Olympic. First, they can act as vigilante of US government and walk around Olympic to gather an information. Since US president are obsessed about exterminating supplying and consuming drug, they might inspect US nationals or other foreign nationals who are using drugs and have detrimental effect on US national interest. Second, they can act to gather information about other heads of states. Usually, various head of states gather Olympic due to its symbolic reference of peace and unity. US government might exploit this opportunity to gather information of other chief of states who have awkward relationships with US.
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Thank you for this as well, Aciel! Have a great day ahead.
There has been huge controversies and protests after ICE announced they will be operating as a bodyguard for US high-ranking professionals during this Olympic taking place in Milan, Italy.
>>> There have been huge controversies and protests after ICE announced that they will operate as a bodyguard for U.S. high-ranking officials during the Olympics taking place in Milan, Italy.
Due to the organizations deteriorating reputation and horrendous approach to migrants, many people are afraid of their activities in Olympic. >>> correct
First, they can act as vigilante of US government and walk around Olympic to gather an information.
>>> First, ICE could act as a vigilante arm of the U.S. government and move around the Olympic venues to gather information.
Since US president are obsessed about exterminating supplying and consuming drug, they might inspect US nationals or other foreign nationals who are using drugs and have detrimental effect on US national interest.
>>> Since the U.S. president is strongly focused on eliminating drug supply and consumption, they might inspect U.S. nationals or other foreign nationals who use drugs, which could have a detrimental effect on U.S. national interests.
Second, they can act to gather information about other heads of states.
>>> Second, ICE could gather information about other heads of state.
Usually, various head of states gather Olympic due to its symbolic reference of peace and unity.
>>> correct
>>> OR: Usually, various heads of state attend the Olympics because of its symbolic meaning of peace and unity.
US government might exploit this opportunity to gather information of other chief of states who have awkward relationships with US.
>>> The U.S. government might exploit this opportunity to collect information on other leaders who have strained relationships with the United States.
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