What concerns or fears, if any, do you have about retirement?
학생이 쓴 원문
I am worried about my retirement life. So I\'m preparing for a second career as a psychologist.
강사 첨삭
How is your day going, [이름]?
It\'s commendable that you\'re taking proactive steps to plan for your future career. Pursuing a second career as a psychologist sounds like an exciting and fulfilling path to explore. Wishing you all the best in your endeavors!
~Kelly^^
I am worried about my retirement life.
>> Correct
OR:
>> I am concerned about my retirement years
So I\'m preparing for a second career as a psychologist.
>> Correct
OR:
>> Therefore, I am preparing for a second career as a psychologist.
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