What costom from your home country are you most fond of? Describe the costom and explain why you are

2017-03-23 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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The most fond of costume in my home country is hanbok for me. There are two reasons to support my answer. The first reason is that we usually wear the costume in special Korean events. To be specific, in new year's day and Thanks giving day. Another reason is that it is so beatiful. There are a lot of colors and designes in the costume. As a result, my favorite costume is hanbok for these reasons.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, [이름]!

Thank you for sharing a part of your culture. Anyway, keep on practicing and using different expressions so you will improve more. Have a good day!

~Kelly^^

The most fond of costume in my home country is hanbok for me.

>> The costume that I am most fond of in my country is Hanbok.

There are two reasons to support my answer.

>> Correct.
The first reason is that we usually wear the costume in special Korean events.

>> The first reason is that we usually wear the costume on special Korean events.

To be specific, in new year\'s day and Thanks giving day.

>> To be specific on New Year\'s day and Thanksgiving day.
Another reason is that it is so beatiful.

>> Another reason is that it is so beautiful.

There are a lot of colors and designes in the costume.

>> Correct.

***designs
As a result, my favorite costume is hanbok for these reasons.

>> Correct.

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