What costom from your home country are you most fond of? Describe the costom and explain why you are
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The most fond of costume in my home country is hanbok for me.
>> The costume that I am most fond of in my country is Hanbok.
There are two reasons to support my answer.
>> Correct.
The first reason is that we usually wear the costume in special Korean events.
>> The first reason is that we usually wear the costume on special Korean events.
To be specific, in new year\'s day and Thanks giving day.
>> To be specific on New Year\'s day and Thanksgiving day.
Another reason is that it is so beatiful.
>> Another reason is that it is so beautiful.
There are a lot of colors and designes in the costume.
>> Correct.
***designs
As a result, my favorite costume is hanbok for these reasons.
>> Correct.
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