What could be an interesting indoor activity that you want to try?
학생이 쓴 원문
I am always interested in learning something informative.
Even though I have worked as a housewife for over 20 years, I am not a good cook. My husband registered for a cooking class for me approximately 15 years ago and I learned how to cook some dishes. But still I am not good at cooking. So every day I am worried about the menu for the dinner. Beriefly, If I have a chance, I’d like to join a side dish cooking class.
And I also want to study medicinal herbs. When I was young I ate delicious food which met my taste. But getting old, I try to eat healthy food which keeps my body healthy. I think it will be very useful for my family and me.
강사 첨삭
Hello there Ms. [이름]!
This is truly interesting to know that you are yet to cook the best dish. I am sure that your ability to pay attention to details being a teacher can somehow translate to the taste of the food when you attempt to cook better. Do not worry about the next menu as Korean delivery and food efficiency is top class. Meanwhile, your penchant to medicinal herbs if far more interesting as it is not quite the interest of many nowadays.
Thank you for this excellent composition! I hope that you continue to express yourself through writing and expand on grammar patterns and vocabulary.
I will see you again. I appreciate your time in drafting.
-T. Donna =)
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Even though I have worked as a housewife for over 20 years, I am not a good cook.
Even though I have worked as a housewife for over 20 years, I am not a good cook.
>> Correct!
My husband registered for a cooking class for me approximately 15 years ago and I learned how to cook some dishes.
>> Correct!
But still I am not good at cooking.
>> Correct!
So every day I am worried about the menu for the dinner.
>> Correct!
Or: everyday
Beriefly, If I have a chance, I’d like to join a side dish cooking class.
>> Correct!
Or: Briefly, if I have a chance, I’d like to join a side dish cooking class.
And I also want to study medicinal herbs.
>> Correct!
When I was young I ate delicious food which met my taste.
>> Correct!
But getting old, I try to eat healthy food which keeps my body healthy.
>> Correct!
I think it will be very useful for my family and me.
>> Correct!
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