What could be the negative effects of motivating by fear?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think it can take a long time to execute the first step.
Because in order for fear to be motivated, you have to endure or overcome fear, but each person has different times.
In addition, since the size of fear varies from person to person, those who have small fears may be fine, but those who have large fears may fall deeper into the quagmire.
I also think that the motivation of the mind can easily collapse.
Motivated by fear, it\'s vulnerable to hurt or failure.
So even if you\'re moving forward, you can easily give up if you encounter obstacles or get a bad result.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]~
Thank you for highlighting your points. In my view, when fear motivates us, we act not for ourselves but rather for others, such as when we are afraid of disappointing them.
Chammy
I think it can take a long time to execute the first step.
>> Correct
Because in order for fear to be motivated, you have to endure or overcome fear, but each person has different times.
>> Because fear must be endured or overcome in order to be motivated, although everyone has a different pace of overcoming fears.
In addition, since the size of fear varies from person to person, those who have small fears may be fine, but those who have large fears may fall deeper into the quagmire.
>> Correct
I also think that the motivation of the mind can easily collapse.
OR
>> Furthermore, I believe that mental motivation might easily be backed down.
Motivated by fear, it\'s vulnerable to hurt or failure.
>> Motivated by fear is vulnerable to hurt or failure.
So even if you\'re moving forward, you can easily give up if you encounter obstacles or get a bad result.
Or
>> Therefore, even if you\'re making progress, you could easily give up if you run across problems or receive unfavorable results.
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