What could you do as a child that you can\'t do now?
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When I was young, I could do many things without any worries. I could sleep without any pressure about time limit. Also, I could cry in front of everyone and I could ask for help. But now, I can\'t do these things. I have to do everything by myself. There is nobody to help me. But I don\'t think that something which I can do is less than something which previous of me could do. But I have to have more responsibility about something which I do. So, I often feel scary.
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Hi Kimberly:)
Aww, I think that is not true. There are a lot of people willing to help you in many ways, like me! If you have troubles, don\'t hesitate to ask me. ^^
When I was young, I could do many things without any worries.
>> CORRECT
I could sleep without any pressure about time limit.
>> I could sleep without any pressure from deadlines.
Also, I could cry in front of everyone and I could ask for help.
>> Also, I could cry in front of everyone and ask for help.
But now, I can\'t do these things.
>> CORRECT
I have to do everything by myself.
>> CORRECT
There is nobody to help me.
>> CORRECT
But I don\'t think that something which I can do is less than something which previous of me could do.
>> But I don\'t think that there is something that I can do before that I can still do now.
But I have to have more responsibility about something which I do.
>> Now, I have more responsibilities.
So, I often feel scary.
>> So, I often feel scared.
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