What could you do as a child that you can\'t do now?

2021-12-31 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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What could you do as a child that you can\'t do now? When I was a child, I could do to worry about my future. I was growing up under the care of my parents. I just studied at school and play with my friends. Now It is a time I can never go back to those day.

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When I was a child, I could do to worry about my future.

>> When I was a child, I worry a lot about my future.

I was growing up under the care of my parents.

>> CORRECT

I just studied at school and play with my friends.

>> CORRECT

Now It is a time I can never go back to those day.

>> Now, it is a time that I can never go back to.

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