What could you do as a child that you can\'t do now?
학생이 쓴 원문
There are many things that a child can\'t do.
First, they can\'t watch some movies that are not suitable to them.
Those movies require more high age to watch them so a child can\'t do.
Also they can\'t enjoy some festivals and compitions.
Those festivals and compitions are allowed to more high age too.
And there are reasonable reasons.
So I think a child can\'t do many things because some kinds of activities require more high age.
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There are many things that a child can\'t do.
>> CORRECT
First, they can\'t watch some movies that are not suitable to them.
>> CORRECT
Those movies require more high age to watch them so a child can\'t do.
>> Those movies that require for people to be certain age.
Also they can\'t enjoy some festivals and compitions.
>> Also, they can\'t enjoy festivals and competitions.
Those festivals and compitions are allowed to more high age too.
>>Those festivals and competitions are more suitable for people at a certain age.
And there are reasonable reasons.
>> These are reasonable reasons.
So I think a child can\'t do many things because some kinds of activities require more high age.
>> So I think that a child can\'t do many things because some activities require certain ages.
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