What countries are you afraid of and why?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think countries are afraid of is China because China is kitchen is China talk and my country history is China talk.
So I hate china
강사 첨삭
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Jean~~
What countries are you afraid of and why?
I think countries are afraid of is China because China is kitchen is China talk and my country history is China talk.
So I hate china
>>> I think what countries are afraid of is China because China is the kitchen, China is the talk, and in my country’s history, China is also the talk. That’s why I hate China. [I HONESTLY CAN\'T UNDERSTAND WHAT YOU\'RE TRYING TO SAY HERE THAT\'S WHY I SIMPLY EDITED THE GRAMMAR BUT THE SENTENCE DOESN\'T MAKE ANY SENSE. CHECK THE SENTENCE BELOW FOR A VARIATION OF THIS SENTENCE.]
>>> OR: I believe many countries are cautious of China due to its growing global influence. In my country, China plays a prominent role in both current affairs and historical narratives. These associations have led me to feel negatively toward China.
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