What countries do you imagine have the cleanest air?
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I guess that the air of Australia is the cleanest one. When I was young, I thought Australia is the country that many animals live. I also think animals and the environment relate to each other very closely. Because many animals live in there, it creates the image of the country more eco-friend. In fact, animals tend to settle down at the good circumstance. Therefore, I imagine the country which has the cleanest air is Australia.
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Hi [이름]!
Yes, Australia is one good place to live in.
It\'s one of my country choice, I hope I would be able to see the Kangaroo\'s too - hahaha.
I guess that the air of Australia is the cleanest one.
>>> I think the air in Australia is the cleanest.
When I was young, I thought Australia is the country that many animals live.
>>> When I was young, I thought Australia was a country where many animals live.
I also think animals and the environment relate to each other very closely.
>>> I also think that animals and the environment are closely related.
Because many animals live in there, it creates the image of the country more eco-friend.
>>> Because many animals live there, it makes the country more eco-friendly.
In fact, animals tend to settle down at the good circumstance.
>>> In fact, animals tend to settle in a good environment.
Therefore, I imagine the country which has the cleanest air is Australia.
>>> Therefore, I imagine Australia is the country with the cleanest air.
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