What countries do you imagine have the cleanest air?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think the countries in the north of earth have clean air.
For example, Norway, Poland, Sweden etc.
The countires\' weather is cold.
I feel that cold air is cleaner than hot air.
Also, I think there are not many factories in cold regions.
Next, I think the countries around the Pacific Ocean have clean air.
Because sea wink seems clean the air.
At these time, Korea is suffering from find dust.
I hope human find out a way to solve the air pollution soon.
강사 첨삭
Hello Jennifer!
I prefer living in a cold place, because it\'s comfortable.
I think the countries in the north of earth have clean air.
>>> The countries in the northern part of the world seem to have clean air.
For example, Norway, Poland, Sweden etc.
>>> CORRECT!
The countires\' weather is cold.
>>> The weather in those countries is cold.
I feel that cold air is cleaner than hot air.
>>> I feel that cold air is cleaner than hot air.
Also, I think there are not many factories in cold regions.
>>> Also, I don\'t think there are many factories in cold areas.
Next, I think the countries around the Pacific Ocean have clean air.
>>> CORRECT!
Because sea wink seems clean the air.
>>> Because sea winks make the air look clean.
At these time, Korea is suffering from find dust.
>>> At this time, Korea is suffering from fine dust.
I hope human find out a way to solve the air pollution soon.
>>> I hope humans find a way to solve air pollution soon.
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