What countries do you like to visit? Why? (ANSWER)

I like to visit Germany. Because there are many meats:) And I want to see the site of the Berlin Wall Because Germany was a divided country because of the Berlin Wall. But now, the wall is collapsed. Now, our country is a divided country and I hope that our country will be unified like Germany. Also, I hope our country will follow the examlple of Germany. So i want to visit Germany. Thank you for reading! By. [이름]

Hi [이름],

 

 Thank you for doing your homework. ^^

  

HOMEWORK:

 

What countries do you like to visit? Why?

Answer in complete sentences.

 

YOUR ANSWER:

I like to visit Germany.
Because there are many meats:)

And I want to see the site of the Berlin Wall
Because Germany was a divided country because of the Berlin Wall.
But now, the wall is collapsed.
Now, our country is a divided country and I hope that our country will be unified like Germany.
Also, I hope our country will follow the examlple of Germany.
So i want to visit Germany.

 

CORRECTIONS:

 

I like to visit Germany.
There are plenty of meat in the said country :)
I also want to see the site of the Berlin Wall.

Germany was a divided country because of the Berlin Wall.
But now, the wall is collapsed.
For our country, South Korea, it is divided and I hope that our country will be unified one day like Germany.
Also, I hope our country will follow the example of Germany.
So, I want to visit Germany.

 

 

** Dear [이름], please take note of the corrections in your homework. ^^

 

Speak with you on tomorrow. J

 

   ---------T. Alexia----------