What countries would you like to visit? Why? Answer in complete sentences.
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HOMEWORK:
What countries would you like to visit? Why? Answer in complete sentences.
YOUR ANSWER:
I want to visit Australia. because in Australia it has many animal and things to eat like sheep meat and I wanna try it. and also scenery of Australia.
CORRECTIONS:
I want to visit Australia. In Australia, it has many animals and there’s much food to eat like sheep meat and I want to try it. Also, I want to see the scenery of Australia.
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