What countries would you like to visit? Why? Answer in complete sentences.

2018-10-30 · 첨삭 강사 Alexia

학생이 쓴 원문

I want to visit Australia. because in Australia it has many animal and things to eat like sheep meat and I wanna try it. and also scenery of Australia.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름],

 

 Thank you for doing your homework. ^^

 

HOMEWORK:

 

What countries would you like to visit? Why? Answer in complete sentences.

 

YOUR ANSWER:

I want to visit Australia. because in Australia it has many animal and things to eat like sheep meat and I wanna try it. and also scenery of Australia.

 

CORRECTIONS:

I want to visit Australia. In Australia, it has many animals and there’s much food to eat like sheep meat and I want to try it. Also, I want to see the scenery of Australia.

 

** Dear [이름], please take note of the corrections in your homework. ^^

 

Speak with you on tomorrow. J

 

   ---------T. Alexia----------

 

 

 

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