What countries would you like to vistit someday?
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one of my bucket lists is drinig coffee while watching Mount Everest at Annapruna Base Camp.
So I\'ll visit Nepal In the near future.
And I hope to visit many countuties such as the Phillipines, Indonesia, Eastern Europe, etc.
I am planning to travel for my vacations or after retiring. I think about early retirement.
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Hi, Miss [이름]su!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille
one of my bucket lists is drinig coffee while watching Mount Everest at Annapruna Base Camp.
>> One of my bucket lists is drinking coffee while watching the Mount Everest at Annapruna Base Camp.
So I\'ll visit Nepal in the near future.
>> CORRECT!
And I hope to visit many countuties such as the Phillipines, Indonesia, Eastern Europe, etc.
>> CORRECT!
I am planning to travel for my vacations or after retiring.
>> CORRECT!I think about early retirement.
>> I am thinking about my early retirement.
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