What countries would you travel to if you were to do a world trip?

2018-04-12 · 첨삭 강사 May

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I think traveling is good anywhere. If i choose one. It's very difficult. If i must choose one place I want to many sight, and many enjoy. Of couse, more importent is who going with me

강사 첨삭

Hi Sir [이름]! Thanks for doing your homework.

I also like travelling. Travelling is one of the best things to do. ^^

~~Teacher May~~

I think traveling is good anywhere.
>> I think travelling to any country is good.
If i choose one.
It\'s very difficult.
>> If I am going to choose one country, it would be difficult for me.
If i must choose one place
I want to many sight, and many enjoy.
>> If I will only travel to one place, I want to stay there longer for sightseeing and for me to enjoy more the place.
Of couse, more importent is who going with me

>> It is also important for me to know the person who will go with me.



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