What country do you want to visit next and why?
학생이 쓴 원문
I want to go to Japan next travel
I often visit to Japan
Because I can speak Japanese
I can go anywhere in Japan
Japan is very close to Korea
I like Japanese food and culture
But Most Korean hate Japan
Korea has been Japan control long time
Japan is similar to Korea but it is different
강사 첨삭
Hi Kay!
Thank you for doing your homework. I hope to talk to you again some day.. Take care ^^
T. DON
What country do you want to visit next and why?
I want to go to Japan next travel
>> I want to go to Japan on my next Travel.
I often visit to Japan Because I can speak Japanese
>> I often visit Japan because I can speak the Japanese language.
I can go anywhere in Japan
>> CORRECT
Japan is very close to Korea
>> CORRECT
I like Japanese food and culture
>> I like the Japanese food and culture.
But Most Korean hate Japan Korea has been Japan control long time
>> Most Koreans hate Japan because they envaded us long time ago.
Japan is similar to Korea but it is different
>> There are some similarities between Japan and Korea.
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